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Minerva (Signed )1: All Yours
Lovely! I really like the lite tone of your story while you managed to portray the dynamics of their relationship so thoroughly, thank you!
PS: Chocolates are always welcome ...

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed reading it. Light tones seem to be difficult for me ... You noticed I couldn't help straying into deeper, more thoughtful waters. Ah well.

Thankfully, the chocolates kept it grounded! ;-)
2014/07/14 - 01:18

mick42 (Signed )1: All Yours
A threesome with Severus and chocolate, lucky Remus.

Author's Response: Doesn't he get all the luck in fanfic? Thanks for commenting. :-)
2014/07/12 - 23:42

articcat621 (Signed )1: All Yours
Loved this!! Lol, those chocolates! I wouldn't mind having one ;) lol

Author's Response: Thanks! You take the chocolates, I'll take the boys. ;-)
2014/07/12 - 20:22

sunny33 (Signed )1: All Yours
LOL, a threesome with chocolates. What a fine idea! :)

Author's Response: Fine, but quite messy. ;-)

Author's Response: Oops, forgot to thank you for commenting!

Thank you. :-)
2014/07/12 - 19:12

nagandsev (Signed )1: All Yours
I love the immediacy and flowing dynamics between them, the intimate actions between them, and the observations and nuances of Remus' about and between him and Severus. And then, wham bam, Severus stills... Remus said the word. I held my breath, and was relieved to move on as they moved on--lovely, lovely work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your lovely, thoughtful review! I'm nosey to know readers' thoughts - your comments are what every writer loves to hear. 
Really chuffed you enjoyed!
2014/07/12 - 13:27


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