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Bettina (Signed )1: Complete short story
Thank you so much for pulling our attention to the problems of the world.
The brother so much represents the influencable people that will believe in the ads and stories told without reflecting on the bigger view.
We will buy and we will have... but who will produce, who will sell?
Have you been there? I've watched such a frightful report on pangasius farms it makes me cry.
2011/08/13 - 10:00

EdgeOfDark (Signed )1: Complete short story
Hi, Alison!

I've been to that part of the world so your story stirs up a lot of pleasant memories, but your story sounded more like an environmental impact statement than the worried thoughts of a young girl. You did pretty good, but I thought you should have brough more character to the story and the girl. That would have made it less sterile and more attractive a read. I hope you get the chance to go visit any part of the Mekong Delta! It was a fun three weeks for me!
2011/06/18 - 22:17

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